these are my promotional giveaways that will come with the product. I need to make some changes like ad a shower head and make the bath tub more realistic
this is my magazine ad, made for the pages of parenthood magazine or kids crafts. This was a design challenge to get it to look like its in the fold of the page.
I absolutely love the rounded feel and the color scheme. The ducks are definitely a cute idea.
ReplyDeleteMy one suggestion would be in the magazine ad: The fact that the baby gets cropped off at the shoulder seems a little awkward. Maybe you could find a photo that has a full upper body?
Agree with the weird cropping in the magazine ad. Maybe move the baby to the far right or find a new picture altogether. I really like your stylized flowers and clouds :]
ReplyDeleteLOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! i like how your ducks look like they are asian with those pointy hats. I say make them bigger and maybe put the name/logo on the side to make it clear that it is a promotional item.... only suggestion.
ReplyDeleteLove your style in general from the Disney designs until now. The thing that concerns me with this is the name. I see what you are doing by combining them (The Words).You have a fresh and simple design with somewhat complicated typography. Maybe changing the color of the H to a blue may help or some kerning. But my mind wants to see bathat not bath hat no matter how hard I try to separate. Just a thought don't harm me please.
ReplyDeleteOr a gradient that transitions the purple to a blue will allow you to keep them combined.
ReplyDeleteI really like the logo, I see and agree with what Derrick is saying. Maybe making "hat" another color could make it a little easier to read, however at first I did not have any trouble reading it. Great ad btw, quite possibly your best yet in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteI really like the 3 rings and the font you used for the name. Really like the color scheme. I do agree with Laura on the picture.
ReplyDeleteI like the ducks. They are very nice for this products. Also I think the color are very nice.
ReplyDeleteI'm excited to see how you transformed your bathroom into a pond scene. I like your product. It is just so happy and bubbly just like you :) Looking forward to your presentation!!!!
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